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aurey09 ([personal profile] aurey09) wrote2007-02-16 01:15 am
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Dawn Drabble

Title: I Broke it
Author: Aurey09
Character: Dawn
Timeline: The Gift 
Number: 14/100 


I ‘remember’ Willow giving me a magicians kit for my 11th Birthday and that when I tried out one of the tricks I broke Buffy’s watch and couldn’t put it back together. Buffy yelled and mom rescued me from her. That none of that ever happened is the real illusion.

I wonder how I changed things? Did mom have another child that I replaced? Did they take mom’s life for mine? She got sick when I appeared. And now Buffy’s dead because of me.

I want the monks to take the spell back. I want to fix what I broke.



Yay! I finally wrote something, only a drabble but I'm still recovering from the concrit last week. I'm not sure about this drabble but I'm posting it anyway.  

[identity profile] boy-named-susie.livejournal.com 2007-02-16 03:37 am (UTC)(link)
Really really *really* liked this. Great insight into Dawn.

"That none of that ever happened is the real illusion." Absolutely perfect line.

[identity profile] aurey09.livejournal.com 2007-02-16 01:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for pointing out that line, it's the only one that stayed through all my many edits of the drabble.